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Dena
Demi-Titan
Posts : 6550
Join date : 2010-05-03
Age : 25
Location : Earth
|  Subject: Switch (A new poemm)  2/27/2011, 5:37 pm | |
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Close your eyes
Cause you cant see
Hold your breath
Cause you cant breathe
Wear your shoes as a hat
Cause your head over heals
Sit on the bottom
Cause your in over your head
Dont bother trying
If you'll end up dead
Dont trust a soul
If all they do is lie
Lay on the ground
Cause you'l never touch the sky
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Zwn (Zoe in Greek)
officer, i just want you to know that i'm not like other girls; i'm cute and quirky
Posts : 8143
Join date : 2010-04-18
Location : bed
| | Subject: Re: Switch (A new poemm) 2/27/2011, 5:39 pm | |
| OhmyGod...That is sooooo good! | |
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Silly Lily
Olympian
Posts : 11433
Join date : 2010-04-06
Age : 26
Location : in my hubbu bubbu bubble- gum bubble (dont pop it!!!)
| | Subject: Re: Switch (A new poemm) 2/27/2011, 5:46 pm | |
| GOOD. GOOD. WH-y am i still using caps? | |
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Dena
Demi-Titan
Posts : 6550
Join date : 2010-05-03
Age : 25
Location : Earth
| | Subject: Re: Switch (A new poemm) 2/27/2011, 5:50 pm | |
| Thankssss I just wrote liek 2 moooooreeee
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Why idd you do it?
You made me cry
I tried and I tried
But all my hope died
Cheater cheater
Thats not who I am
And if you think so
Then you dont understand
Dont twist my words
Dont spout your lies
Cause even if I won
Your just one of the spies
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I dont get it
I dont understand
Did I get in the way?
Did I spoil your plan?
Well heres new for you
I really dont care
I tried and I tried
So dont you dare
Im inocent before guilty
Ill prove that Im right
Dont cross me again
Cause this time I'll fight | |
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Dexter
Minor God
Posts : 8306
Join date : 2011-01-14
Age : 27
| | Subject: Re: Switch (A new poemm) 2/27/2011, 6:14 pm | |
| Man these are really good and I think they would be good lyrics for a song | |
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Dena
Demi-Titan
Posts : 6550
Join date : 2010-05-03
Age : 25
Location : Earth
| | Subject: Re: Switch (A new poemm) 2/27/2011, 6:32 pm | |
| Thats actually kind of wha they are XD | |
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Dexter
Minor God
Posts : 8306
Join date : 2011-01-14
Age : 27
| | Subject: Re: Switch (A new poemm) 2/27/2011, 8:49 pm | |
| OH well thats good XD hehe | |
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Dena
Demi-Titan
Posts : 6550
Join date : 2010-05-03
Age : 25
Location : Earth
| | Subject: Re: Switch (A new poemm) 2/28/2011, 2:11 pm | |
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Guest
Guest
| | Subject: Re: Switch (A new poemm) 2/28/2011, 8:36 pm | |
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Guest
Guest
| | Subject: Re: Switch (A new poemm) 3/1/2011, 11:52 pm | |
| Good, but I disagree with the last two lines  |
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Dena
Demi-Titan
Posts : 6550
Join date : 2010-05-03
Age : 25
Location : Earth
| | Subject: Re: Switch (A new poemm) 3/2/2011, 5:59 pm | |
| In which one? The first second or third? | |
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