Frost my awesome charrie

Subject: Frost my awesome charrie 3/11/2011, 7:11 pm

Character Name:Frost
Gender: Female
Age: 18
Description:5'6 Frost my awesome charrie Mortal_Kombat__Frost_by_heiraksay

God and mortal parent: Skadi and unknown
Powers**: Can make an ice ball the size of a base ball and an ice puddle 15 times each makes her really tired if uses it all up
Flaws***:Evil, devious, and violent
Pets: None
Weapon****:2 ice daggers
Talents/Skills:none
RP Example*:I was walking around the courtyard at my training/prison place. When my kinda ofr a friend Sub-Zero came over. He put his sword up to my neck so I made an ice puddle so he would get off ballance and I shot an ice ball at him. Then a battle broke out.
Biography*:Lived in a prison/training place since she was born. Never has had any friends. She has been training ever since she could walk. She had to choose a side to fight with when she was a child. She would go against her own allies to win.
Notes:

Subject: Re: Frost my awesome charrie 3/11/2011, 11:34 pm

Biography should be complete sentences.

Subject: Re: Frost my awesome charrie 3/11/2011, 11:39 pm

how are they not complete sentences

Subject: Re: Frost my awesome charrie 3/11/2011, 11:42 pm

not a subject and a verb

Subject: Re: Frost my awesome charrie 3/11/2011, 11:43 pm

What?

Subject: Re: Frost my awesome charrie 3/11/2011, 11:55 pm

http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/sv_agr.htm

Subject: Re: Frost my awesome charrie 3/11/2011, 11:58 pm

Fixed it.......I think?

Subject: Re: Frost my awesome charrie 3/13/2011, 2:15 pm

Approved (barely).

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