Zwn (Zoe in Greek)
officer, i just want you to know that i'm not like other girls; i'm cute and quirky
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 |  Subject: *Insert emotion here* is...  3/21/2011, 6:11 pm | |
| In grammar and composition today, we had to write these poems about emotions, and I kinda wanted to share mine. Enjoy :)
Heartbreak
Heartbreak smells like old stale chocolates, like salty tears, and rotten flowers.
It's a throbbing, pulsing pain, right below my heart but pulsing with the same beat.
It tastes like store-bought lemonade, artificial and fake, like all of the "It'll be okay's" I hear.
The once bright and cheery old lady's house who died a month ago, the one that no one had the heart to tear down. That's how heartbreak looks.
Pounding rain, wailing sobs, and sad love songs are the sound of heartbreak.
Yeah, I know it's depressing. I couldn't help it xD I'm probably gonna make more of these, thoughhhh. | |
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Liz
Head Admin, Goddess of Reading and Fangirliness
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Join date : 2010-12-07
Age : 26
Location : Hyperventilating over a book.
| | Subject: Re: *Insert emotion here* is... 3/21/2011, 6:16 pm | |
| :O
That's realllyyy good. I'm jealous of you. haha. (: I love your whole simile thing. I don't tend to use those a lot... xD. | |
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Dexter
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Join date : 2011-01-14
Age : 27
| | Subject: Re: *Insert emotion here* is... 3/21/2011, 9:33 pm | |
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