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| Subject: Jake, my hopefully better character^^ 12/11/2011, 2:10 pm | |
| |JAKE|MICHEAL|ADAMS|
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|JAKE|MICHEAL|ADAMS| |APOLLO|MINERVA| |16|THE BASICS Name: Jake Adams. (Jake is short for Jacob.) Age/Birthday: Jake was born on November 15th, 1995 Gender: Male Godly Parentage: His Paternal Grandmother is Minerva and his Paternal grandmother is Minerva Claimed: Claimed by Minerva and Apollo. Mortal Family: Allan Adams~ Son of Apollo (Father), Natalie Adams~ Daughter of Apollo (Mother), Years in Camp: Jake has been at camp since he was 10. He has 4 more years of service. Rank: Probaito Cohort: N\A
HISTORY
Age 1-4: Jake was always the smart one. He also had a knack for learning things before others in his age group… way before. By the time he was 3, he was doing algebra and was playing the piano like a pro. He lived in Cambridge, Massachusetts as his father taught at Harvard. 5-6: Jake had really outgoing parents, a well known Harvard professor as a dad, and a doctor as a mother. Jake was rather plain at school. He was also ahead of everyone else. When the boys his age discovered hot Wheels, he discovered how to do calculus. He knew all the answers, he had a few friends, he was quiet, and he had his fair share of fun. Age 7-9: By now, Jake was the smart one. The one who was found doing grade 12 math in grade 3 a breeze, the one who would know every word in the dictionary. His teachers were amazed at his ability to do such things. When they asked him how he knew this, he would claim to not know, but secretly, he knew it was because of his paternal grandmother. Age 10-Present: At age 10, he was sent to Camp Half Blood to begin his training. He bid his farewell to his parents and was dropped off when he was 10 and trained for 6 months. He now resides in Camp Half Blood fulfilling his 10 years of service. PHYSICAL APPEARANCE Jake has brown hair and green eyes lined with a bit of grey around the edge off his pupil. He is around 6'0. He is a bit muscular with a 6 pack from all the training at Camp Jupiter. He is 150 lbs. He has a scar on his back from when he was training with Lupa. He is normally seen in shorts and a t-shirt. Occasionally a hoodie.
PERSONALITY
Jake, at first glance, is a very emotionless boy. If you get to know him, he is really caring and thoughtful. Though, he strongly dislikes people who make a big deal out of things. He often corrects people and tells them that they are wrong over the smallest things. Though he can be rude at times, he also stands up for other people’s rights, and often helps then when they are in need. Jake is loyal to his friends.
Fatal Flaw: Jake's fatal flaw would be lack of self belief. Most of the time, he can't find the courage to believe in himself. He's not exactly pessimistic though, its just that he dosn't thenk that he can do particualr things himself.
POWERS AND SKILLS
- By playing music or singing,(technically pretty much every form of making music in general) he can communicate with others. 2-3 People at a time. This also requires complete focus. Which for him, this is very, very hard as he cannot concentrate on one thing at a time.
- Jake can heal minor cuts and buises, nothing that would require serious medical attention. This drains him a little. This can only be used on one person every 2 hours.
- Jake is very smart, he also has a very good memory.
- He is also
very good at math, which helps him in archery, as he uses an estimate to aim since his archery isn’t exactly up to standards.
- For a 16 year old,
he is extremely smart, but those things come with a price. If you were to connect his brain to something that reads thoughts, it would probably explode in 2 seconds. My point is, he has a ton of thoughts in his head at once, mixed emotions, past memories, things he wants to forget.
WEAPONS
- Jake uses a crossbow as his weapon.
- When he is practicing, he uses his spare sword\bow.
Last edited by Ichigo.Nub on 12/12/2011, 8:36 pm; edited 8 times in total |
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Dexter Minor God
Posts : 8306 Join date : 2011-01-14 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^ 12/11/2011, 3:21 pm | |
| UHmm so is his mother was an unammed mortal doctor or what cause like if Apollo and Minerva both claim him as a grandson doesn't he have to like have a mother who was a Minerva child | |
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| Subject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^ 12/11/2011, 3:24 pm | |
| Godly Parentage: His Paternal Grandmother is Minerva, his maternal grandfather is Apollo. <-- meaning that His mother is a daughter of Apollo and his Father is a son of Minerva. |
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Dexter Minor God
Posts : 8306 Join date : 2011-01-14 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^ 12/11/2011, 3:28 pm | |
| I didn't see the little parentheses next to his mother....The freaking spoiler hates me.
Oh well moving, You need to put in two more flaws, what's the deepest wound he can heal, how much does it drain him, and if I'm not mistaken we dont allow future seers even if their parent/grandparent/lineage is Apollo | |
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| Subject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^ 12/11/2011, 3:58 pm | |
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Liz Head Admin, Goddess of Reading and Fangirliness
Posts : 6891 Join date : 2010-12-07 Age : 27 Location : Hyperventilating over a book.
| Subject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^ 12/11/2011, 7:48 pm | |
| I don't think we're allowed to have descendants of the gods, or children of 2 demigods. I remember there being a problem with this before. I'm not quite sure though. | |
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| Subject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^ 12/11/2011, 9:09 pm | |
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Liz Head Admin, Goddess of Reading and Fangirliness
Posts : 6891 Join date : 2010-12-07 Age : 27 Location : Hyperventilating over a book.
| Subject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^ 12/11/2011, 9:12 pm | |
| I'm sorry!! You could pick one of the two, Athena or Apollo and edit the form to fit them! I know, it looks like you spent a LOT of time on this form. | |
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| Subject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^ 12/11/2011, 9:17 pm | |
| Edited. Anything else I left out that relates to him being related to Minerva, just ignore it. I kept him smart on purpose. |
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Liz Head Admin, Goddess of Reading and Fangirliness
Posts : 6891 Join date : 2010-12-07 Age : 27 Location : Hyperventilating over a book.
| Subject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^ 12/11/2011, 9:26 pm | |
| Oh mylanta. I'm completely and utterly sorry. I have to apologize. I knew I wasn't going crazy. . Your character is allowed. It's a roman character, correct? Right. Okay. I'm sorry I made you edit it! I swear I read your form, I did, I'm usually not this bad. I sincerely apologize. You're allowed to have a child of two demigods, I was thinking of the Greek gods when someone tried to make a child of two demigods. | |
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| Subject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^ 12/11/2011, 9:28 pm | |
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Liz Head Admin, Goddess of Reading and Fangirliness
Posts : 6891 Join date : 2010-12-07 Age : 27 Location : Hyperventilating over a book.
| Subject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^ 12/11/2011, 9:40 pm | |
| You changed back everything you wanted to change? I'm still profoundly sorry, by the way :3. Anyway, this is a beautiful character form and I must say I admire it. Just a few quick questions and we should be good: 1.) Is his crossbow CB? 2.) What do you mean by "broadcasting music?" What does this entail? Is there a limit to how many times he can do this a day, and does it drain him at all? Also, do his healing powers have a daily limit and/or do they drain him at all? | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^ 12/11/2011, 9:46 pm | |
| I edited the lest 2 things, but what do you mean be 'CB'? |
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Liz Head Admin, Goddess of Reading and Fangirliness
Posts : 6891 Join date : 2010-12-07 Age : 27 Location : Hyperventilating over a book.
| Subject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^ 12/11/2011, 9:57 pm | |
| CB= Celestial Bronze, sorry. xD.
And... I still don't understand "broadcasting music." Meaning that when he sings or plays an instrument he can send messages to people with his songs? How does this work? Does everyone hear these messages? | |
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| Subject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^ 12/11/2011, 11:38 pm | |
| I'll just take the 'broadcasting' part out. And yes, everyone can hear it, but only the people he directs it to get the message. |
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Liz Head Admin, Goddess of Reading and Fangirliness
Posts : 6891 Join date : 2010-12-07 Age : 27 Location : Hyperventilating over a book.
| Subject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^ 12/11/2011, 11:44 pm | |
| Okay. That power is very cool! xD Approved. | |
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Rachel Draconic Overlord
Posts : 14476 Join date : 2010-04-05 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^ 12/11/2011, 11:51 pm | |
| Sorry, but unapproved. I don't think we allow you to have your legacy with two godly ancestors, and there's some future-sight in the form that must have been overlooked. We don't usually allow characters to be prophetic. | |
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Liz Head Admin, Goddess of Reading and Fangirliness
Posts : 6891 Join date : 2010-12-07 Age : 27 Location : Hyperventilating over a book.
| Subject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^ 12/11/2011, 11:57 pm | |
| Future sight.. somehow... . Should be under powers... xP Anyhow, two godly ancestors.. I do believe they mention the children of two demigods in the books when they talk about New Rome, and I've never seen that they aren't allowed on here, but I'm not really sure seeing as I don't believe anyone's attempted to create one of these children yet. | |
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Rachel Draconic Overlord
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| Subject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^ 12/12/2011, 12:02 am | |
| Yes, I thought about it, and two godly parents is alright.... but, future sight, lolno. | |
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Liz Head Admin, Goddess of Reading and Fangirliness
Posts : 6891 Join date : 2010-12-07 Age : 27 Location : Hyperventilating over a book.
| Subject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^ 12/12/2011, 12:03 am | |
| Definitely not. That needs to be edited out. | |
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| Subject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^ 12/12/2011, 8:35 pm | |
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Rachel Draconic Overlord
Posts : 14476 Join date : 2010-04-05 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^ 12/12/2011, 8:44 pm | |
| Alrighty, re-approved-ed. | |
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Liz Head Admin, Goddess of Reading and Fangirliness
Posts : 6891 Join date : 2010-12-07 Age : 27 Location : Hyperventilating over a book.
| Subject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^ 12/12/2011, 8:50 pm | |
| I hate to do this but I have to ask... un-approved again xP Okay... he's a Roman who lives in Camp Half Blood? His family is entirely confusing. His paternal grandmother is Minerva... twice? But his father is a son of Apollo! I'm assuming you just made a typo but I have to check. Is his crossbow Celestial Bronze or Imperial Gold? | |
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| Subject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^ 12/12/2011, 9:59 pm | |
| Mother's side= Apollo Father's side= Minerva Imperial Gold. |
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Liz Head Admin, Goddess of Reading and Fangirliness
Posts : 6891 Join date : 2010-12-07 Age : 27 Location : Hyperventilating over a book.
| Subject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^ 12/12/2011, 10:01 pm | |
| Got it. Alright. Approved. | |
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