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PostSubject: Jake, my hopefully better character^^   Jake, my hopefully better character^^ Icon_minitime12/11/2011, 2:10 pm

|JAKE|MICHEAL|ADAMS|

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PostSubject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^   Jake, my hopefully better character^^ Icon_minitime12/11/2011, 3:21 pm

UHmm so is his mother was an unammed mortal doctor or what cause like if Apollo and Minerva both claim him as a grandson doesn't he have to like have a mother who was a Minerva child
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PostSubject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^   Jake, my hopefully better character^^ Icon_minitime12/11/2011, 3:24 pm

Godly Parentage: His Paternal Grandmother is Minerva, his maternal grandfather is Apollo. <-- meaning that His mother is a daughter of Apollo and his Father is a son of Minerva.
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PostSubject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^   Jake, my hopefully better character^^ Icon_minitime12/11/2011, 3:28 pm

I didn't see the little parentheses next to his mother....The freaking spoiler hates me.

Oh well moving, You need to put in two more flaws, what's the deepest wound he can heal, how much does it drain him, and if I'm not mistaken we dont allow future seers even if their parent/grandparent/lineage is Apollo
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PostSubject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^   Jake, my hopefully better character^^ Icon_minitime12/11/2011, 3:58 pm

Edited
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PostSubject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^   Jake, my hopefully better character^^ Icon_minitime12/11/2011, 7:48 pm

I don't think we're allowed to have descendants of the gods, or children of 2 demigods. I remember there being a problem with this before. I'm not quite sure though.
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PostSubject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^   Jake, my hopefully better character^^ Icon_minitime12/11/2011, 9:09 pm

*headdesk*
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PostSubject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^   Jake, my hopefully better character^^ Icon_minitime12/11/2011, 9:12 pm

I'm sorry!! You could pick one of the two, Athena or Apollo and edit the form to fit them! I know, it looks like you spent a LOT of time on this form.
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PostSubject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^   Jake, my hopefully better character^^ Icon_minitime12/11/2011, 9:17 pm

Edited. Anything else I left out that relates to him being related to Minerva, just ignore it. I kept him smart on purpose.
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PostSubject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^   Jake, my hopefully better character^^ Icon_minitime12/11/2011, 9:26 pm

Oh mylanta.
I'm completely and utterly sorry. I have to apologize. I knew I wasn't going crazy. Facepalm.
Your character is allowed. It's a roman character, correct? Right. Okay. I'm sorry I made you edit it! I swear I read your form, I did, I'm usually not this bad. Embarassed I sincerely apologize. You're allowed to have a child of two demigods, I was thinking of the Greek gods when someone tried to make a child of two demigods.
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PostSubject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^   Jake, my hopefully better character^^ Icon_minitime12/11/2011, 9:28 pm

Is he accepted?
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PostSubject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^   Jake, my hopefully better character^^ Icon_minitime12/11/2011, 9:40 pm

You changed back everything you wanted to change? I'm still profoundly sorry, by the way :3.
Anyway, this is a beautiful character form and I must say I admire it. Just a few quick questions and we should be good:
1.) Is his crossbow CB?
2.) What do you mean by "broadcasting music?" What does this entail? Is there a limit to how many times he can do this a day, and does it drain him at all?
Also, do his healing powers have a daily limit and/or do they drain him at all?
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PostSubject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^   Jake, my hopefully better character^^ Icon_minitime12/11/2011, 9:46 pm

I edited the lest 2 things, but what do you mean be 'CB'?
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PostSubject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^   Jake, my hopefully better character^^ Icon_minitime12/11/2011, 9:57 pm

CB= Celestial Bronze, sorry. xD.

And... I still don't understand "broadcasting music." Meaning that when he sings or plays an instrument he can send messages to people with his songs? How does this work? Does everyone hear these messages?
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PostSubject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^   Jake, my hopefully better character^^ Icon_minitime12/11/2011, 11:38 pm

I'll just take the 'broadcasting' part out. And yes, everyone can hear it, but only the people he directs it to get the message.
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PostSubject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^   Jake, my hopefully better character^^ Icon_minitime12/11/2011, 11:44 pm

Okay. That power is very cool! xD Approved.
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PostSubject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^   Jake, my hopefully better character^^ Icon_minitime12/11/2011, 11:51 pm

Sorry, but unapproved. I don't think we allow you to have your legacy with two godly ancestors, and there's some future-sight in the form that must have been overlooked. We don't usually allow characters to be prophetic.
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PostSubject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^   Jake, my hopefully better character^^ Icon_minitime12/11/2011, 11:57 pm

Future sight.. somehow... Facepalm. Should be under powers... xP
Anyhow, two godly ancestors.. I do believe they mention the children of two demigods in the books when they talk about New Rome, and I've never seen that they aren't allowed on here, but I'm not really sure seeing as I don't believe anyone's attempted to create one of these children yet.
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PostSubject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^   Jake, my hopefully better character^^ Icon_minitime12/12/2011, 12:02 am

Yes, I thought about it, and two godly parents is alright.... but, future sight, lolno.
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PostSubject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^   Jake, my hopefully better character^^ Icon_minitime12/12/2011, 12:03 am

Definitely not. That needs to be edited out.
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PostSubject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^   Jake, my hopefully better character^^ Icon_minitime12/12/2011, 8:35 pm

Done.
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PostSubject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^   Jake, my hopefully better character^^ Icon_minitime12/12/2011, 8:44 pm

Alrighty, re-approved-ed.
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PostSubject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^   Jake, my hopefully better character^^ Icon_minitime12/12/2011, 8:50 pm

I hate to do this but I have to ask... un-approved again xP
Okay...
he's a Roman who lives in Camp Half Blood?
His family is entirely confusing. His paternal grandmother is Minerva... twice? But his father is a son of Apollo! I'm assuming you just made a typo but I have to check.
Is his crossbow Celestial Bronze or Imperial Gold?
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PostSubject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^   Jake, my hopefully better character^^ Icon_minitime12/12/2011, 9:59 pm

Mother's side= Apollo
Father's side= Minerva
Imperial Gold.
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PostSubject: Re: Jake, my hopefully better character^^   Jake, my hopefully better character^^ Icon_minitime12/12/2011, 10:01 pm

Got it. Alright. Approved.
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