Hailey, my new Roman

Full name: This person's name is Hailey Jordan Pond. She prefers her whole first name, but her best friends call her 'Hai Hai'.
Any nicknames?: Hailey, once again, is called 'Hai Hai' by her best friends.
Age: Hailey is fifteen currently.
Years at Camp: Hailey has been at CJ for nine years currently.

God and mortal parent: Hailey's parents are Sommanus, roman form of Hyponos, god of sleep. Her mother, the mortal, is Aline Pond.
Date of birth: Hailey was born on March 6th, 1997.
Place of birth: Hailey was born at Las Vegas.

Appearance(a picture, if you don't have one you could give a description or just leave it blank): Picture above.
Eye color: Hailey has brownish-greenish eyes.
Hair(color, length, style, etc.): Hailey has brownish-blackish hair that comes past her shoulders, and she usually has it straight.

Height: Hailey is 5'4", about average height.
Body type(tall, skinny, fat, etc.): Hailey is skinny.
Distinct markings(freckles? Scars? Birthmarks? Etc.): Hailey has very light freckles. They are so light, no one can see them. She also has a birthmark on her forehead, covered by her hair. It rather looks like a stain.
Personality(Are they angry, nice, friendly, unique, violent?): Hailey is a very nice, sweet, kind, loving person. She sometimes needs "waken up", because she always falls asleep. It is probably because of her father. Hailey likes to go shopping or eating with her friends. She also likes to visit the older folks and take care of them. Hailey is also very unique. She is interested in science, especially in special kind of rocks kind of science. Hailey goes to the nearby-CJ beach daily just to collect rocks. This is a secret about her, so when she does it, she does it at the farthest end of the beach, just incase a friend would come.
Style(This is optional:try http://polyvore.com/ to make it): (Don't wanna do the link so....) Hailey usually wears her hair straight, and wears a hat on top of it. She likes to do this very much. Hailey also usually wears sweaters, no matter what time of the year it is. She HAS to always have her hat matching her sweaters or shirts. Hailey makes her dogs' wear the same outfit as her (cool fact). She likes to wear colorful things, mostly. Also, Hailey loves to wear boots. Very long ones, too.

Powers**: Hailey has the power to make someone fall asleep for ten minutes at a time. She can do this five times a day, and they can resist.
Fatal Flaw*: Hailey's biggest/fatal flaw is being alone. If you ever even touched the subject of her loosing her family/friends, she'd break down.
Flaws*(2 other random flaws, like sucks at vollyball, is afraid of cats, etc.): Hailey hates slugs, she is afraid of spiders, and she is hates BIG BIG rollercoasters, and lastly, Hailey falls asleep at any kind of time. It's just her.

Weapon(s): Hailey has a sword made out of.......whatever the Romans use as material. But, yeah, it's made out of that.
Pets: Hailey has two dogs: Crius and Rombol. They always have the same outfits as her, and follow her around. (Crius used to be one of my chars so shshshsh don't tell him I named Hailey's dog after him...)
Talents/Skills: Hailey is good at finding rocks.

RP Example*: Hailey looked at a different-kind of rock. She smiled as she put it in her backpack. It had wet sand on it, so it must of just came on the shore. Or, far out from the shore, judging Hailey would never go to the shore. She didn't like to be wet. Anyway, she continued picking up rocks when, suddenly, she came across the most gorgeous, awesome rock she had ever seen. It was a light kind of blue. Hailey put that in her backpack, finishing her day of rock-collecting, heading back to CJ. She hoped no one would see her.
Biography*: Hailey grew up with her mother, basically. They did everything together. Soon, her mother got her Crius and Rombol. Hailey was so happy. At four, when she started preschool, she fell asleep a lot. Hailey's mother took her to the doctor, and right after that, she was claimed. Her mother said that for about three weeks, she was with a mysterious-kind-of man. After that, Hailey's mother.....got pregnant, and had Hailey. The man had disappeared. Hailey's mother said that the man's name was Sommanus. After two years, Hailey HAD to go to CJ. Ever since she got there, Hailey has been roaming the world of being a demigod.

Other Notes: Nope.

I hate to be weird, but I feel like a fear of sharks is kind of not a fatal flaw. It's not going to affect her in battle, usually, so it's not potentially "fatal" unless she's fighting near the beach...
Otherwise, your form looks good.

K, thanks. Edited.

Okay! Approved.