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PostSubject: New charrie(Finished)   New charrie(Finished) Icon_minitime8/22/2012, 5:48 pm

Full name:
Deborah Anne Collins
Any nicknames?:
Deborah Anne has no nicknames, and always insists on being called by her full name.
Age:
14.
Years at Camp:
Around 8 months.
Year Rounder or Summer Camper?:
Deborah Anne will be a Summer camper, but her father decided it would be best to have stay year-round for the first year.

God and mortal parent:
Athena, and Christopher John Collins.
Date of birth:
January 6, 1998
Place of birth:
Olympus.

Appearance(a picture, if you don't have one you could give a description or just leave it blank):
Spoiler:
Eye color:
Brown
Hair(color, length, style, etc.):
She has straight black hair that she always wears up in a bun.
Height:
5 feet, 4 inches
Body type(tall, skinny, fat, etc.):

Skinny
Distinct markings(freckles? Scars? Birthmarks? Etc.):
She has a crescent shaped birthmark on her wrist.
Personality(Are they angry, nice, friendly, unique, violent?):
Deborah Anne is a shy girl, who gets very attached to the few friends she has. She is smart, being a daughter of Athena, and normally gets along better with animals than humans. Deborah Anne also is very emotional.

Powers**:
She can summon and talk to owls. The talking to owls doesn't really take a lot of effort, but the summoning does. She can summon up to thirty owls per day, and the most she can summon at one time are seven. She can do this five times a day.
Fatal Flaw*:
Loyalty. ((I know that this flaw is used a lot, but it matches with her personality.))
Flaws*(2 other random flaws, like sucks at volleyball, is afraid of cats, etc.):
1. She is very emotional
2. She is afraid of Spiders
Weapon(s):
She has a CB knife.
Pets:
None
Talents/Skills:
Deborah Anne is very good at doing anything academic, she is good at fighting( with her knife, of course, and sometimes with a sword.) She is also good at horse back riding.

RP Example*:
Deborah Anne looked up into the blue sky. She was in one of her favorite places, the savannah in Africa. In the distance, there was a family of lions resting beneath a tree. She could barely see them, even with her glasses. Deborah Anne sighed with happiness and contentment. Soon she would be traveling to America.
Biography*:
Deborah Anne traveled around the world, with her father, a environmentalist. Deborah Anne loved seeing all the people and animals on their trips. They normally never stayed in one place for more than a month. She had gone to every contenient, every time adding to her collection of photos.

When Deborah Anne was two, they went to the outback in Australia for the first time. Christopher take his little daughter out on the trips into the outback. On one of these trips, she was almost killed by a snake, but an owl swooped down and killed the snake before she was bitten. Her father couldn't understand how she had not been bitten. He didn't know that Deborah Anne was a demigod. Athena hadn't told him.

Strange incidents followed, where Deborah Anne would be found near owls. As she got older, the amount of owls increased, going from one to 15. Her father couldn't understand how the owls knew to come at that time. Not even Deborah Anne knew that she accidentally summoned them when she was in need.

Deborah Anne was never kicked out of any schools. The reason for this was that she was home schooled, by her father and a private tutor named Jean. Her father taught her science, and to an extent some history. Jean taught her the rest of the studies. Jean always accompanied them on there travels, much to Deborah Anne's displeasure.

Deborah Anne and Jean clearly didn't get along, but her father didn't notice. He was thinking of asking her to marry him. That changed when one day, Jean turned into a Dracnae, and attacked Deborah Anne. She was the only one home. Deborah Anne once more summoned a bunch of owls, this time on purpose, which killed Jean\the monster. Her father came back from buying the ring, and was shocked when he found the hotel room in shambles, his daughter surrounded by owls(This was a bad sign to him, as it normally meant that something bad almost happened) and Jean nowhere to be found. One look at Deborah Anne's face showed him that she had killed her. Deborah tried to explain, but her father didn't listen.

The bond between them had definitely changed. Deborah Anne always felt that he couldn't really love her anymore. She became more and more depressed, until she tried to kill her self. Her father sent her to a mental hospital.

13-year-old Deborah Anne couldn't stand it there. She hated being stuck in one place for more than a month. The staff were to cautious, and made sure that she didn't kill herself. But they couldn't make her eat. She stopped eating, and it got to a point where they had to inject nutrients into her. Her father stopped traveling, and stayed in New York, near his daughter.

When he started visiting, Deborah Anne began to recover. She started eating again, and got to the point where she didn't have to stay there in the hospital. She returned to her father, and the bond between the two went back to normal. As it turned out, her father had happened to talk with a satyr, and this particular satyr recognized her as a demigod. Her father broke the news to her after four months, on her 14th birthday. She agreed to go as a summer camper, and they arranged it so he would be in New York to pick her up. Deborah Anne finally went to camp, at age 14, on January 10(Yes, I know it's not in the winter. Her father said she needed at least some training before she came back.).

Other Notes:
None
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PostSubject: Re: New charrie(Finished)   New charrie(Finished) Icon_minitime8/25/2012, 10:07 pm

I like the form itself. The roleplay example seems a bit shot but it matches the requirements. Mostly I'm worried about the power. What exactly is that power? Does she use some sort of telepathic summoning or is it like a natural instinct? Please explain the power more.
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