please approve 2

Demigod form:

Character Name:Alexandra
Gender:female
Age: 12
Description (hair and eye color, height, body type (skinny, muscular, etc) required):blond, gray, 6foot 7inches, lean
God and mortal parent:Apollo,emma
Powers:none
Flaws:Gets angered easily, too proud, when i get mad i blame other people
Pets:none
Weapon:bow and arrows and a knife or sword
Talents/Skills:very good archery
RP Example*i walked down the street going to see my cougar. I snuck over to him "hey buddy" i said petting him then giving him some meat at least there is someone i could love. it was at least midnight i took him out for a minuate and gave him some more meat. we hid in the alley we slept in and grabbed a blanket. I wept it around him and me then we went to sleep for another miserable night
Biography*: I live in New York for two years. Then i moved to LA and that is when i meet a monster. I ran and ran. I am only seven. Then my mom moved us back to new york because she think it is too dangerous. when i was 12 she sent me to camp half blood and i was a year rounder ever since

Please redo your RP example, it is very confusing. Biography has to be 5 sentneces long. add another flaw

i can find many areas in the RP example that could be improved upon. and also, the biography cant be just things explaining yourself, you make a small story about it.

okay then, approved