My first character

Mortal Posts : 123 Join date : 2013-11-23

Full name: Jordan Bernard Giovanni
Any nicknames?: Applesauce
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Years at Camp: 3
God and mortal parent: Hephaestus and Linda Giovanni
Date of birth: 11/23/1999
Place of birth: Ney York, New York
Appearance(a picture, if you don't have one you could give a description or just leave it blank):[url="tinyurl.com/mjzlzd"]link[/url]
Eye color: Purple
Hair(color, length, style, etc.): Long, black hair
Height: 5'7"
Body type(tall, skinny, fat, etc.): Lean
Distinct markings(freckles? Scars? Birthmarks? Etc.): None
Personality(Are they angry, nice, friendly, unique, violent?): Violent yet friendly
Powers**: Can become immune to fire for 20 minutes, 3 times a day, with a cooldown of 1 hour. And can shoot a fireball out of his hands 5 times a day that is 200*F with, with a cooldown time of 1 hour. Both of his powers weaken him 10% every time they are used.
Fatal Flaw: Helps his friends even when in a life or death situation
Flaws(2 other random flaws, like sucks at volleyball, is afraid of cats, etc.): Obnoxious, anxious
Weapon(s): A CB sword named Inferno that lights on fire when Jordan wants it to. It stays on fire for 10 minutes or when it goes into the sword holder and has a cooldown of 1 hour. The fire is 150*F.
Pets: None
Talents/Skills: He is fast and smart
RP Example*: I walk along the beach. It had been so long since I went to the beach. The last time I went was when I was eight. But that was only because it was my birthday. Also known as this day, 6 years ago. I looked at a tree and sent a fireball at it. I used my sword to cut through what was left of the trunk.
Biography*: Jordan was born and raised in New York, New York. He was a normal boy until the day a hellhound came after him. He outran it and told his friend. His friend happened to be a demigod and led him to camp. While he was there, Jordan had his cabin mates forge him a magic sword that would light on fire. He named it Inferno.
Other Notes: None

Subject: Re: My first character 11/23/2013, 11:06 pm

i'd say that obnoxious and annoying are nearly the same thing, so i think you should add a different flaw. how much do his powers drain him?

also, did you mean to put a picture under appearance? i just wanted to be sure, as there was just a bit of the code there.

Mortal Posts : 123 Join date : 2013-11-23

Edited, and yes there is supposed to be a picture, but it wont let me post images until I have been part of the site for 7 days. So you have to typw the link in to get the picture.

Subject: Re: My first character 11/24/2013, 2:47 pm

approved!

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