| The Mystrious Case of the Black Pony [Fanfictions Entry] | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: The Mystrious Case of the Black Pony [Fanfictions Entry] 4/23/2010, 9:21 pm | |
| The Black Pony. That was what they called it. The Black Pony. Whenever something happened in Ponto Land that couldn't be explained, the black pony was the one who was blamed. No, they weren't racist. They were nothing at all. For Ponto Land doesn't exist, and even that is the Black Pony's fault. These would be his adventures, but I cannot write them. For his adventures never happened, for he blew up his world they called Ponto Land.
... xDDDDDDDDDDDDDD |
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Kendall Creator of the Site
Posts : 3700 Join date : 2008-09-12 Location : It's Hamtaro time.
| Subject: Re: The Mystrious Case of the Black Pony [Fanfictions Entry] 4/23/2010, 9:25 pm | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: The Mystrious Case of the Black Pony [Fanfictions Entry] 4/23/2010, 9:27 pm | |
| xD Writing about Ponies isn't much of my strong point xD |
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Kendall Creator of the Site
Posts : 3700 Join date : 2008-09-12 Location : It's Hamtaro time.
| Subject: Re: The Mystrious Case of the Black Pony [Fanfictions Entry] 4/23/2010, 9:27 pm | |
| I actually prefer a story with dialogue, and maybe characterization.
But this is a start. 8D | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: The Mystrious Case of the Black Pony [Fanfictions Entry] 4/23/2010, 9:29 pm | |
| ...One entry a person? Or can I make another one? |
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Kendall Creator of the Site
Posts : 3700 Join date : 2008-09-12 Location : It's Hamtaro time.
| Subject: Re: The Mystrious Case of the Black Pony [Fanfictions Entry] 4/23/2010, 9:30 pm | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: The Mystrious Case of the Black Pony [Fanfictions Entry] 4/23/2010, 9:31 pm | |
| Ok. ...Now that I look at this, it's more poetry than anything. |
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Evimero Titan
Posts : 20053 Join date : 2010-02-14 Age : 29 Location : A dimensionally transcendental box.
| Subject: Re: The Mystrious Case of the Black Pony [Fanfictions Entry] 4/24/2010, 12:14 am | |
| Am I allowed to be mean? yes?
FAIL! | |
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Kendall Creator of the Site
Posts : 3700 Join date : 2008-09-12 Location : It's Hamtaro time.
| Subject: Re: The Mystrious Case of the Black Pony [Fanfictions Entry] 4/24/2010, 12:21 am | |
| I thought it was good.
Better than yours. >;] | |
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Damascus qt 3.14
Posts : 6349 Join date : 2010-04-05 Age : 28 Location : The Migrant Fleet- Terminus systems
| Subject: Re: The Mystrious Case of the Black Pony [Fanfictions Entry] 4/24/2010, 4:40 am | |
| hmm, yeah, more poetry than a story | |
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