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Dexter
Minor God
Posts : 8306
Join date : 2011-01-14
Age : 27
|  Subject: Dylan Son of Athena  1/15/2011, 1:31 am | |
| Character Name: Dylan
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Description (hair and eye color, height, body type (skinny, muscular, etc) required): agile, black hair, brown eyes, somewhere between skinny and muscular
God and mortal parent: Athena(God) Unknown father
Powers**: no real powers
Flaws***:personal loyalty, pride,and impateience
Pets: Owl and 2 wolves
Weapon****: Two celestial bronze swords and a bow and some arrows
Talents/Skills: Can see the strategy in any map and an excelent arcer and swordsman also an avid tree climber.
RP Example*: I lead the harpies to a clearing and drew my bow there were about 5 in all and each came in alone. The first 3 I killed quickly with my bow but then i ran out of arrows. I drew my swords then hid in the nerby brush. As the last two came out, I snuke over to a tree and climbed it with ease. When they gave up searching and headed my way, I jumped from my hiding spot and cut the last 2 in half simultaniously.
Biography*: I was born in MS but I spent my life in New York at a foster home. I never knew my parents but somehow living in New York makes me feel closer to my mom than ever. Sometimes I wonder what my mom or my dad would think of me if they got to know me. If I ever do meet either of my parents then I'm going to make it a point to know why they couldn't keep me. I hope every day that I can meet them.
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Kendall
Creator of the Site
Posts : 3700
Join date : 2008-09-12
Location : It's Hamtaro time.
| | Subject: Re: Dylan Son of Athena 1/15/2011, 4:16 pm | |
| ADHD and dyslexia are standard demigod flaws. Add two more flaws, and how is his loyalty a flaw?
Your powers aren't powers. More like skills. | |
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Dexter
Minor God
Posts : 8306
Join date : 2011-01-14
Age : 27
| | Subject: Re: Dylan Son of Athena 1/15/2011, 4:36 pm | |
| do you have a suggestion for powers | |
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Kendall
Creator of the Site
Posts : 3700
Join date : 2008-09-12
Location : It's Hamtaro time.
| | Subject: Re: Dylan Son of Athena 1/15/2011, 4:42 pm | |
| You don't need to have powers. | |
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Dexter
Minor God
Posts : 8306
Join date : 2011-01-14
Age : 27
| | Subject: Re: Dylan Son of Athena 1/15/2011, 4:44 pm | |
| ok and his loyalty is a flaw because he cant leave any1 behind no matter what the reason | |
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Kendall
Creator of the Site
Posts : 3700
Join date : 2008-09-12
Location : It's Hamtaro time.
| | Subject: Re: Dylan Son of Athena 1/15/2011, 4:45 pm | |
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Dexter
Minor God
Posts : 8306
Join date : 2011-01-14
Age : 27
| | Subject: Re: Dylan Son of Athena 1/15/2011, 4:45 pm | |
| i cant think of 2 more to be honest | |
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ML
Demi-Titan
Posts : 5527
Join date : 2010-03-05
Age : 26
Location : Classified Information
| | Subject: Re: Dylan Son of Athena 1/15/2011, 4:49 pm | |
| Think Of something like pride or vain or cocky.
Something like that for the flaws. | |
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Dexter
Minor God
Posts : 8306
Join date : 2011-01-14
Age : 27
| | Subject: Re: Dylan Son of Athena 1/15/2011, 4:50 pm | |
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ML
Demi-Titan
Posts : 5527
Join date : 2010-03-05
Age : 26
Location : Classified Information
| | Subject: Re: Dylan Son of Athena 1/15/2011, 4:53 pm | |
| Also I dont think He can have his owl as a gift from his mother so please take that out he can still have the owl it jsut cant be agift | |
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Dexter
Minor God
Posts : 8306
Join date : 2011-01-14
Age : 27
| | Subject: Re: Dylan Son of Athena 1/15/2011, 5:00 pm | |
| thanks for the help is it ok now or is there anything else that might need to be fixed. | |
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Kendall
Creator of the Site
Posts : 3700
Join date : 2008-09-12
Location : It's Hamtaro time.
| | Subject: Re: Dylan Son of Athena 1/16/2011, 10:57 pm | |
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