Noah Smith son of Hermes

Character Name:Noah Smith
Gender:Male
Age:14
Description:Dark Brown hair ,and Brown. 6ft 2, Thin mildly tanned. Tends to were tattered jeans, camp half-blood T-shirt, and camp half blood neck-less with Carved wooden Etruscan.]http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Etruscans]
God and mortal parent:Hermes, Sarah Smith
Powers**: No particular power, but sneaky, and persuasive.
Flaws***:Fears Vampires, feels defensive of him and his things (Even if they are bad), and has low self esteem
Pets:N/
Weapon****: Two handed Celestial Bronze sword
Talents/Skills:Good at causing distractions, and getting close and personal.
RP
Example*:As I walked outside I noticed it was dark. I had just woke up and got out of bed. I assumed it was about to be dawn. But the camp fire coals were still hot, and the were no smells of fresh breakfast being cooked. Then something clicked, Benet, one of the big pranksters had chuckled whenever he took a sip of his soda. I checked Benet's pockets. Sure enough there were three empty packets of dissolved Tylenol PM. When I had turned to talk to Henry! I had missed capture the flag and slept all day. I gathered a handful of cold mud and walked over to Benet's bunk.
Biography*:lives in Decatur, Georgia With His mother Sarah Smith Who works at a gas station.He went to a lower class school.Greg's acadamy , it was dirty, ugly, and full of gangs. Then he was cornered by a few guys, who were acting really weird, he prepared for a fight. They of course, were common, but they pulled weird knifes on him. There faces were freaky. But a sayter named Henry saved him. Then he was taken back to camp half-blood Notes:Was 12 when taken to camp halfblood.

You have to buy a kid of the big three you cant start as one read rules then try again plz

Alright, sry

no problem

You need to put 3 flaws. But otherwise it's great!(:

Oh yeah and three flaws didnt look at that

Oh... Okay, this good?

flaws are like cocky pride vain stuff like that and i would put the sneaky and persuaive under skills not powers

? I thought I was talking about fears in flaws... I'll switch some stuff. Sorry if I'm annoying you.

easy mistake and your not annoying me i'm glad to help

Thx, I'm assuming that I'm done. But I will wait for response. Really appreciate it.

yeah just wait for kendall's finally word and your welcome for the help

L right.

Under powers; "and being stranded alone in a desert."

That doesn't really make any sense, and those 'powers' should probably be under Talents/Skills, since they aren't really powers.

Oh yeah, I was adding that to flaws, and did not realize that I put it there. I did not know were it was. And did not notice it, so it kinda stayed there. Thx for pointing it out.

Whwn you actually RP (post) then you can't post as someone else unless they are one of your characters.

IK I have RPed before. Just making the character is different.

The chat script is not allowed for RP Example.

K ill fix it.

Approved.