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Zwn (Zoe in Greek)
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Prologue (Latonya’s POV)

Okay, one thing I have to say before the story goes on: I never wanted any of this. I never wanted to grow up in the circus. I never wanted to feel like the odd one out. I also never wanted to be born with bright pink hair.

Of course, life has to give me what I don’t want. Life’s just that unfair.

There are some advantages to growing up in a circus like this one, though. All of the acts are real. The magic? Real magic. Not some stupid illusion or a crappy card trick. It’s pretty sweat.

What do I do, you’re probably wondering? I’m the chef. Even though I don’t go on stage, I’m the most important part. That’s also pretty sweat.

Also, my friends are way cool. There’s Ichigo Nightfire, who’s a girl, by the way. Everyone expects her to be a boy. And, well, she can swallow fire, stick her hands into fire, create fire even.

There’s also Andre. He’s the magician. His parents left him at the circus. Even though I was real little at the time, I can still kind of remember it. But Andre can’t, and he doesn’t mind. He likes it.

There’s also a big secret about the circus. Most of the acts, they’re done by demi-gods, Half god, half mortal. Ichigo’s dad is Hephaestus. Andre’s parents were demi-gods, a daughter of Hecate and a son of Mania. He got the Hecate powers mostly.

Who’s my parent? I don’t have one. Well, that’s what everyone says. And it makes sense, too. I can’t do anything special. All I can do is cook. Not that I really need an act, anyways. I’m fine with being the chef.

But everything got weird on the first warm day of the year. Way weird, let me tell you. You have no idea.

Oh, wait, I never told you my name. I’m Latonya. I’ve been here all my life, and as I said, I was born with pink hair, just like how Andre was born with green hair. We’re all just weird like that.
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So, a Cirque du Freak/Percy Jackson style story. Not sure if it would count as a fan fic or not. Read, comment, criticize, whatever. JUST DON'T HATE.
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hmm, pretty good ... extend the story, its just a monologue right now
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I'm going to add more. Duh. I'm making chapter one. I don't need obvious stuff like that.
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Isn't that kinda the poit of PROLOUGE rambo
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i know that!!! don't judge me i was just saying something


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well you shouldn't point out the obvious then you might not be judged for it.Hehe
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We aren't judging. You just sound like a smart @$$ saying that, and you sound like you think I'm some idiot. I don't take that lightly.
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well, if i just say "pretty good" and just that then it sounds like spam to me and i feel guilty
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It won't be counted as spam people say that for writing all the time


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Peeps if you want a boring thing to do thats really interesting if you find it dig up in the apporved forms for my old charries and look up on ones that may relate to this story!
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Well that isn't spam. Or you could've said 'Really good. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work!' Or just said 'Really good,' because spamming is better than making someone feel insulted.
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lets keep the discussion on this *points at story* at this time and sorry for making you feel insulted i didn't mean it


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that was kinda hard to understand steel
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Lol he meant to look at his character forms and try to see if you can find one that is kinda like a character from this story.
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*random guessing* *Points at ... bob* i guess
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Ah much better to understand thank you for explaining
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no not bob but that is what I meant but i guess i cloudve explained better
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Hey psyco! LUV the intro! pm me you make the next chapter.
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You said sweat instead of sweet in one part.

Other then that good, maybe a little too straight-forward.
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shoot, i wanna be born with bright pink hair! why would someone NOT wanna be born with bright pink hair????
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