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| Subject: Speeds second charrie, Bella, daughter of Demeter, unfinshed 4/6/2011, 11:16 pm | |
| Character Name:Bella Gender:female Age:11 Description: black hair and blue eye, 5'2 skinny. God and mortal parent: Demeter, unknown dather. Powers**:Can grow almost any plant, can only summan harmful plants 10 times a day.After a while, she starts to get tired, but not from making little flowers like dasies. only about after making 10 harmful plants. She can make non-harmful plants 20 times a day befor her energy starts to drain. Flaws***:Is hyper, does not know when to stop playing around, and is timmed. Pets:no pets. Weapon****:summing plants like poison lvy, and other harmful plants. Talents/Skills:none. RP Example*: I walk around the camp, thinking,"Why dad, why did I have to go to this camp." "They are calling me this name a ,"Demi-god". I dont like being called something that I do'nt even know about." I look around the cabin that they put me in. I say to someone at my cabin,"What is a demi-god." "Its when a god, female, or male, has a kid with a mortal." "Then who is our god parent?" "Demeter, goddes of alrgulture." She says. Biography*:Bella was not really good with familly, so when a satyar told her when she was 10, that she has a full camp full of familly, she dident really enjoy going to camp. Only she got thear, to the camp as they call it, she still did'nt like it very much. Sometimes she was happy with some of the campers. But she still had questions, about camp half-blood. Notes:Was claimed sooner than most.
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| Subject: Re: Speeds second charrie, Bella, daughter of Demeter, unfinshed 4/9/2011, 10:15 am | |
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| | | Zwn (Zoe in Greek) officer, i just want you to know that i'm not like other girls; i'm cute and quirky
Posts : 8143 Join date : 2010-04-18 Location : bed
| Subject: Re: Speeds second charrie, Bella, daughter of Demeter, unfinshed 4/9/2011, 10:46 am | |
| Do her powers make her tired? And 'nice to others' isn't a flaw, and it's also repeating 'too nice to others'. 'Likes to play around' isn't a flaw, either. To make it a flaw, it would sound something like 'she plays around too much' or 'doesn't know when it's time to work and time to play'. | |
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| Subject: Re: Speeds second charrie, Bella, daughter of Demeter, unfinshed 4/9/2011, 10:48 am | |
| ok, thanks fishy, ill edit. |
| | | Zwn (Zoe in Greek) officer, i just want you to know that i'm not like other girls; i'm cute and quirky
Posts : 8143 Join date : 2010-04-18 Location : bed
| Subject: Re: Speeds second charrie, Bella, daughter of Demeter, unfinshed 4/9/2011, 11:15 am | |
| How many times a day can she make non-harmful plants? And 'nice to others' isn't a flaw. | |
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Posts : 5527 Join date : 2010-03-05 Age : 26 Location : Classified Information
| Subject: Re: Speeds second charrie, Bella, daughter of Demeter, unfinshed 4/9/2011, 11:35 am | |
| timmed? and add another flaw | |
| | | Zwn (Zoe in Greek) officer, i just want you to know that i'm not like other girls; i'm cute and quirky
Posts : 8143 Join date : 2010-04-18 Location : bed
| Subject: Re: Speeds second charrie, Bella, daughter of Demeter, unfinshed 4/9/2011, 1:33 pm | |
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