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PostSubject: Chione (also known as Khione)   Chione (also known as Khione) Icon_minitime4/24/2011, 7:35 pm

Character Name:Casy
Gender:female
Age:14
Description:White hair and yellow eye's, 5'7, muscular.
God and mortal parent:Knione, and unknown mortal
Powers**:can make a snow storm for 10 min easy, not even draning her much, a snow storm for 30 min makes her tired, and one hour is her max, if she does that, she passes out soon after. She can make a 10 min snow storm 8 times befor she gets tired, and a 30 min one 5 times a day total, and only 2 times a day for an hour long snow storm. A 10 min snow storm causes 3 inches of snow, a 30 min snow storm causes 1 foot of snow, and an hour long snow stormcauses 2 to 3 feet of snow.
Flaws***:stays up late at night, has anger problems, and understmates others fighting ability.
Pets:a loyal wolf named death.
Weapon****:A ice sword that can eather freez people, or harm them, she choses.
Talents/Skills:knows how to fight with out her sword.
RP Example*:I went outside. I sommun a snow storm for thirty min and get a little tired. I go and get my jacket, and go play outside. I wait for the snow storm to be over, and sumnon a 10 min one. Once that ends, I go back to my cabin, and goes to sleep. Once I wake up, I do a hard one, an hour long one. a pass out on my bed a few minits later.
Biography*:"Casy was born special."That is what she mom says to Casy befor camp. Some times she was angry with some one, and made it snow for 20 minits. She was brought to camp when she was in seventy grade. She knew about the gods and such, so it was no shock to her when she was brought to camp and alowed in.
Notes:took kararte. And joined Kasies side for the war.


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PostSubject: Re: Chione (also known as Khione)   Chione (also known as Khione) Icon_minitime4/24/2011, 7:38 pm

Your second flaw isn't a flaw (everyone is a little tired in the morning), so you'll need two more flaws.
Your second power doesn't relate to Khione.
Your RP example is really choppy and not in complete sentences.
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PostSubject: Re: Chione (also known as Khione)   Chione (also known as Khione) Icon_minitime4/24/2011, 7:56 pm

Fixed fishy
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Zwn (Zoe in Greek)
officer, i just want you to know that i'm not like other girls; i'm cute and quirky
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PostSubject: Re: Chione (also known as Khione)   Chione (also known as Khione) Icon_minitime4/24/2011, 8:00 pm

You switch between third and first person in the RP example.
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PostSubject: Re: Chione (also known as Khione)   Chione (also known as Khione) Icon_minitime4/24/2011, 8:04 pm

I did, op sorry, I will fix that.
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PostSubject: Re: Chione (also known as Khione)   Chione (also known as Khione) Icon_minitime4/24/2011, 8:27 pm

How many inches of snow do her storms create?
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PostSubject: Re: Chione (also known as Khione)   Chione (also known as Khione) Icon_minitime4/24/2011, 8:45 pm

I did not even think about that Kenny, thanks, again. Fixed.
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PostSubject: Re: Chione (also known as Khione)   Chione (also known as Khione) Icon_minitime4/25/2011, 11:58 pm

Approved.
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