Isabella, Daughter of Iris

Character Name: Isabella Red
Gender: Female
Age: 12
Description(hair and eye color, height, body type (skinny, muscular, etc) required):Layered Jet-Black hair with Natural Rainbow Highlights, Rainbow eyes(color depends on her mood; mostly black), Unusually Tall for her age(5 feet, 9 inches tall),skinny but muscular, Olive colored skin, face of a 14 year old
God and Mortal Parents: Iris; Michael Red
Powers**: Can travel on rainbows to different places only twice(to get there, to get back), Can disguise herself as rainbow mist only after it rains(not many times in Camp Half-Blood)(it also inflicts nausea apon her)
Flaws***: Hubris, Uncontrolable Grudges, Hatred towards Hades Campers, Arrogance
Pets: Pegasus: Victoria(Pure white with silver wings)
Weapons****: Silver colored Caduceus with a celestial bronze tip with rainbow snakes(can summon any rainbow objects but only when it's charged with sunlight), a silver colored bow, silver colored arrows with celestial bronze arrowheads(when shot a trail of rainbow dust comes out of the end)(are disguised as a necklace which, when commanded, turns into the bow and arrows)
Talents/Skills: Expert Equestrian, Archer(not as good as Apollo Campers), artist(sketching), sword fighter(not as good as Athena and Ares campers)
RP Example*: I fly above camp. A little black rock zooms past my head. "What?",
I say in shock. I look at the cabins and see 5 Hades Campers on the Apollo cabin. "UGH HADES KIDS!!!", I think. I fly down onto cabin. "Why did you guys throw that rock at me?" I yell. They snicker at me. "We didnt throw the rock at you, we sling-shotted it at you", they say in arrogance. They all start laughing."STILL WHY DID YOU DO THAT???" I yelled even louder. They ignore me and fling a rock at a Demeter girl on her cabin roof. She falls off the cabin. "OWW!", she says. "THAT'S IT!!!" I take out my caduceus and I wave it. It transforms into a rainbow sling-shot. I take one of the rocks and aims it at the 5 Hades kids. They back up. I draw the sling-shot at the kids. "Okay, we surrender!" they say. "Good, now don't you dare shoot that thing at anyone anymore!"I said."We won't shoot it at you, but we will shoot it at them" I roll my eyes and hop on Victoria and I fly away. They play more deadly pranks on me in the next 9 weeks.
Biography*: Iris gave birth to Isabella during March of 1999 in Albany, New York. Isabella has Jet-Black hair, like Michael, but has natural Rainbow Highlights, like Iris. They both have olive skin so she does too. Iris gave her the Rainbow eyes. She knew she was a half-blood because her father didn't think keeping it a secret would do any good(but he didn't tell her about Camp Half-Blood). In January of 6th Grade a satyr named Chaise told her about camp. He said she belonged there. He took her to her house and told her dad what happened. She needed to leave. It took 2 months to get to Long Island Sound(on foot), and by the time they got there 20 monsters were tracking them. Isabella killed 9 of them and other campers and satyrs killed the remaining 11 monsters. When she crossed the boundary a caduceus from Iris landed in her hands. It enabled her to summon objects and Travel on a rainbow. She has been at camp ever since.
Notes: She wears a black "Famous"(the "F" is rainbow), black jeans that have rainbow drawings and a rainbow (fake) bullet casing chain on them, black headphones around her neck, silver and black colored converse sneakers.

Ok hows that? any more editing?

So, she just walks on her rainbows?

No, she can do more i mean she can use them as weapons but doesn't all the time, she prefers her caduceus

If she can do more with her powers, I suggest you add them in.

edited. what else do i need to change? PLZ ACCEPT!

Please? or at least give advice...Please

I think messages to anybody's minds aren't really an Iris power. She may run the IM system, but that doesn't really mean she can send messages to people's minds. Just IM them.

I don't think we'll be able to allow her to make any weapon out of rainbows.

Ok I see your point. Edited

Approved.