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Kirby
Demigod
Posts : 713
Join date : 2011-03-27
Age : 22
Location : lol nope
|  Subject: Ashley daughter of Ares  5/31/2011, 9:40 pm | |
| Character Name:Ashley
Gender:Female
Age:12
Description (hair and eye color, height, body type (skinny, muscular, etc) required):Long curly black hair, sea blue eyes, skinny but strong, 5ft, 6 in
God and mortal parent:Ares and Catherine Drury
Powers**:None
Flaws***:Un-reasonable, drama queen, speaks before thinks
Pets:2 year old police dog
Weapon****:6 inch CB dagger
Talents/Skills:Fighting, singing, scaring people
RP Example*:I wake up to screaming people and the sound of clashing swords.I smile and yell, "Yo, shut it!" The people come up to my room.I grab my dagger from my death poster coverd nightstand, walk out, and point it at them. I mumble a curse and my mom yells at me. I yell back to her. I go to my room and listen to goth music
Biography*:Ashley Drury was born on December 15, 1998. Her father left a note with a name on it of wich he wanted to name their born baby.Ashley was so agressive in all her years, so all of her sitters quit.Except for one. Amelia. She stayed with Ashley to make sure she got polite. She died on Nevember eleventh, two thousand one. She sufficated from the ash from the falling North tower. Today, the memory of Amelia to Ashley, is not as a sitter, friend or good friend, but mother.
Notes:None
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Rave Girl
Minor God
Posts : 8309
Join date : 2010-12-18
Age : 25
Location : Graveyard
| | Subject: Re: Ashley daughter of Ares 5/31/2011, 9:44 pm | |
| You need to add the hight | |
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Kirby
Demigod
Posts : 713
Join date : 2011-03-27
Age : 22
Location : lol nope
| | Subject: Re: Ashley daughter of Ares 5/31/2011, 9:45 pm | |
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Rave Girl
Minor God
Posts : 8309
Join date : 2010-12-18
Age : 25
Location : Graveyard
| | Subject: Re: Ashley daughter of Ares 5/31/2011, 9:49 pm | |
| The last sentence of your RP example dosn't fit ith the rest of it | |
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Kirby
Demigod
Posts : 713
Join date : 2011-03-27
Age : 22
Location : lol nope
| | Subject: Re: Ashley daughter of Ares 5/31/2011, 9:54 pm | |
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Rave Girl
Minor God
Posts : 8309
Join date : 2010-12-18
Age : 25
Location : Graveyard
| | Subject: Re: Ashley daughter of Ares 5/31/2011, 9:57 pm | |
| No I mean it dosn't fit because you have her pointing her dagger at someone then she's eating breakfist it makes no sence | |
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Kirby
Demigod
Posts : 713
Join date : 2011-03-27
Age : 22
Location : lol nope
| | Subject: Re: Ashley daughter of Ares 5/31/2011, 9:58 pm | |
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Rave Girl
Minor God
Posts : 8309
Join date : 2010-12-18
Age : 25
Location : Graveyard
| | Subject: Re: Ashley daughter of Ares 5/31/2011, 10:02 pm | |
| Wasn't she already in her room | |
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Kirby
Demigod
Posts : 713
Join date : 2011-03-27
Age : 22
Location : lol nope
| | Subject: Re: Ashley daughter of Ares 5/31/2011, 10:04 pm | |
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Rave Girl
Minor God
Posts : 8309
Join date : 2010-12-18
Age : 25
Location : Graveyard
| | Subject: Re: Ashley daughter of Ares 5/31/2011, 10:05 pm | |
| It never says she left her room | |
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Kirby
Demigod
Posts : 713
Join date : 2011-03-27
Age : 22
Location : lol nope
| | Subject: Re: Ashley daughter of Ares 5/31/2011, 10:05 pm | |
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Rave Girl
Minor God
Posts : 8309
Join date : 2010-12-18
Age : 25
Location : Graveyard
| | Subject: Re: Ashley daughter of Ares 5/31/2011, 10:08 pm | |
| Why would she leave her room and point it at them if they're in her room | |
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Kirby
Demigod
Posts : 713
Join date : 2011-03-27
Age : 22
Location : lol nope
| | Subject: Re: Ashley daughter of Ares 5/31/2011, 10:09 pm | |
| They are'nt, they are about to walk in her room but she steps out before they can. | |
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Rave Girl
Minor God
Posts : 8309
Join date : 2010-12-18
Age : 25
Location : Graveyard
| | Subject: Re: Ashley daughter of Ares 5/31/2011, 10:11 pm | |
| You should at least say 'I walk out before they come in my room.' | |
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Silly Lily
Olympian
Posts : 11433
Join date : 2010-04-06
Age : 27
Location : in my hubbu bubbu bubble- gum bubble (dont pop it!!!)
| | Subject: Re: Ashley daughter of Ares 5/31/2011, 10:32 pm | |
| And you're Bio, can you please state how she got to camp because Amelia doesnt seem like a main event to me, just that she was a person that died. Also how did Ashley respond to her death? Did that lead to anything? | |
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Rachel
Draconic Overlord
Posts : 14476
Join date : 2010-04-05
Age : 27
| | Subject: Re: Ashley daughter of Ares 6/1/2011, 12:19 pm | |
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