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| Subject: My character storm 6/16/2011, 11:01 am | |
| Character Name:Storm Gender:female Age:15 Description (hair and eye color, height, body type (skinny, muscular, etc) required): black hair and dark blue eyes, 5'5, and muscular and fit God and mortal parent: the goddess Enyo and Leon Powers**:no power Flaws***: I will do any thing if someone I care for is in danger, I rarely smile, I can't control my temper, and I break down if reminded of my sisters. Pets:bobcat named Eris Weapon****:two hunting knives, one Stygian iron and the other celestial bronze Talents/Skills: I am a beast in battle or combat RP Example*: I woke up tears streaming down my face and sweat beading up on my forehead. The dream had been horrible, my sisters dying right before my eyes and then saying," Why did you let us die Storm? Why? We thought you lived us." This wasnt the first time I had had a nightmare, but it was definitely one of the worst. I laid my head down, but no matter how much I tried I couldn't fall back asleep. Biography*:I ran away from 'home' when I was twelve with my five year old twin sisters because my 'father' Leon threatened to kill my sisters and I. A couple months later we stumbled to an abandoned female bobcat who we named Eris. A couple years after that one of the twins was attacked by a wildcat. The other shortly followed dying from not lack of food and water. I nearly went crazy with grief. A year and a half later I stumbled down half blood hill and have lived here ever since.
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Zwn (Zoe in Greek) officer, i just want you to know that i'm not like other girls; i'm cute and quirky
Posts : 8143 Join date : 2010-04-18 Location : bed
| Subject: Re: My character storm 6/16/2011, 11:10 am | |
| You don't need all of the stuff at the end of the form (like the things with stars and down.) What do you mean by 'goofy with grief'? | |
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| Subject: Re: My character storm 6/16/2011, 11:11 am | |
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Zwn (Zoe in Greek) officer, i just want you to know that i'm not like other girls; i'm cute and quirky
Posts : 8143 Join date : 2010-04-18 Location : bed
| Subject: Re: My character storm 6/16/2011, 11:22 am | |
| I'm guessing that Kenny made it so it changes to goofy. Try using crazy. And, last I checked, Enyo was the goddess of war, so grief wouldn't be a power for a child of Enyo. | |
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| Subject: Re: My character storm 6/16/2011, 11:26 am | |
| She can use her powers 10 times a day because it drains her of energy |
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| Subject: Re: My character storm 6/16/2011, 11:30 am | |
| She has the power of grief because of the amount of grief she went through with the death of her little sisters |
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Zwn (Zoe in Greek) officer, i just want you to know that i'm not like other girls; i'm cute and quirky
Posts : 8143 Join date : 2010-04-18 Location : bed
| Subject: Re: My character storm 6/16/2011, 1:09 pm | |
| The power has to do with their godly parent, not what they've been through. | |
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| Subject: Re: My character storm 6/16/2011, 1:17 pm | |
| Oh.... Okay then I changed it |
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Zwn (Zoe in Greek) officer, i just want you to know that i'm not like other girls; i'm cute and quirky
Posts : 8143 Join date : 2010-04-18 Location : bed
| Subject: Re: My character storm 6/16/2011, 1:21 pm | |
| One, those aren't powers, two, they're like Mary/Gary Sue (they make her a little too perfect), and three, the last one is power play. | |
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| Subject: Re: My character storm 6/16/2011, 1:23 pm | |
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Zwn (Zoe in Greek) officer, i just want you to know that i'm not like other girls; i'm cute and quirky
Posts : 8143 Join date : 2010-04-18 Location : bed
| Subject: Re: My character storm 6/16/2011, 1:26 pm | |
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