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PostSubject: My character storm   My character storm Icon_minitime6/16/2011, 11:01 am

Character Name:Storm
Gender:female
Age:15
Description (hair and eye color, height, body type (skinny, muscular, etc) required): black hair and dark blue eyes, 5'5, and muscular and fit
God and mortal parent: the goddess Enyo and Leon
Powers**:no power
Flaws***: I will do any thing if someone I care for is in danger, I rarely smile, I can't control my temper, and I break down if reminded of my sisters.
Pets:bobcat named Eris
Weapon****:two hunting knives, one Stygian iron and the other celestial bronze
Talents/Skills: I am a beast in battle or combat
RP Example*: I woke up tears streaming down my face and sweat beading up on my forehead. The dream had been horrible, my sisters dying right before my eyes and then saying," Why did you let us die Storm? Why? We thought you lived us." This wasnt the first time I had had a nightmare, but it was definitely one of the worst. I laid my head down, but no matter how much I tried I couldn't fall back asleep.
Biography*:I ran away from 'home' when I was twelve with my five year old twin sisters because my 'father' Leon threatened to kill my sisters and I. A couple months later we stumbled to an abandoned female bobcat who we named Eris. A couple years after that one of the twins was attacked by a wildcat. The other shortly followed dying from not lack of food and water. I nearly went crazy with grief. A year and a half later I stumbled down half blood hill and have lived here ever since.


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Zwn (Zoe in Greek)
officer, i just want you to know that i'm not like other girls; i'm cute and quirky
Zwn (Zoe in Greek)


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PostSubject: Re: My character storm   My character storm Icon_minitime6/16/2011, 11:10 am

You don't need all of the stuff at the end of the form (like the things with stars and down.)
What do you mean by 'goofy with grief'?
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PostSubject: Re: My character storm   My character storm Icon_minitime6/16/2011, 11:11 am

I typed i n s a n e
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Zwn (Zoe in Greek)
officer, i just want you to know that i'm not like other girls; i'm cute and quirky
Zwn (Zoe in Greek)


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Join date : 2010-04-18
Location : bed

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PostSubject: Re: My character storm   My character storm Icon_minitime6/16/2011, 11:22 am

I'm guessing that Kenny made it so it changes to goofy. Try using crazy.
And, last I checked, Enyo was the goddess of war, so grief wouldn't be a power for a child of Enyo.
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PostSubject: Re: My character storm   My character storm Icon_minitime6/16/2011, 11:26 am

She can use her powers 10 times a day because it drains her of energy
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PostSubject: Re: My character storm   My character storm Icon_minitime6/16/2011, 11:30 am

She has the power of grief because of the amount of grief she went through with the death of her little sisters
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Zwn (Zoe in Greek)
officer, i just want you to know that i'm not like other girls; i'm cute and quirky
Zwn (Zoe in Greek)


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PostSubject: Re: My character storm   My character storm Icon_minitime6/16/2011, 1:09 pm

The power has to do with their godly parent, not what they've been through.
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PostSubject: Re: My character storm   My character storm Icon_minitime6/16/2011, 1:17 pm

Oh.... Okay then I changed it
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Zwn (Zoe in Greek)
officer, i just want you to know that i'm not like other girls; i'm cute and quirky
Zwn (Zoe in Greek)


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Join date : 2010-04-18
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PostSubject: Re: My character storm   My character storm Icon_minitime6/16/2011, 1:21 pm

One, those aren't powers, two, they're like Mary/Gary Sue (they make her a little too perfect), and three, the last one is power play.
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PostSubject: Re: My character storm   My character storm Icon_minitime6/16/2011, 1:23 pm

I changed it
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Zwn (Zoe in Greek)
officer, i just want you to know that i'm not like other girls; i'm cute and quirky
Zwn (Zoe in Greek)


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Join date : 2010-04-18
Location : bed

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PostSubject: Re: My character storm   My character storm Icon_minitime6/16/2011, 1:26 pm

Approved.
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