Malcolm Lake son of Ares! (Please check!)

Full name: Malcolm Lake
Any Nicknames?: Mal (even though he doesnt like it)
Age: !6
Years at Camp: 2

God and Mortal Parent: Ares and Hazel Lake
Date of birth: 13.2.1996
Place of birth: New York

Appearance: Curly red hair,Freckles,Green eyes and a mischievous smile.
Eye color: apple green
Hair: curly red hair
Height: 1.79
Body type:Thin, Muscular (a little) and athletic.
Distinct markings: freckles
Personality: Malcolm Gets Violent quickly and hes always a little Grumpy. He gets annoyed around others randomly and Shouts insults. Hes actually nice once you get to Know him but if he aint your friend hes plain nasty.
Style: Bermuda shorts,his orange camp t-shirt and a few leather bracelets.

Powers: Malcolm has No powers.

Fatal flaw: When he was small ares cursed him for giving up a fight.Now he never does even
if he knows he will lose or die.
Flaws:Malcolm cant swim very well, and he is scared of heights.

Weopon: Malcolm has a Celestial bronze Sword wich has no name.

Pets: None.
Talents/skills:Malcolm is good at swordplay and climbing and wrestling.


RP example:
As my head slammed against the wall stars danced in my eyes."Ha! You Lost kid! Youre not a real son of Ares!"
That comment made me fill with anger.I hated talking about Ares being my father!"RAAAH" I yelled and charged.
My leather bracelet changed into a celestial bronze sword."HaHa! Thats supposed to make you win?!L-O-S-E-R!!!"
"Dad!"I called "help me!" The sword turned on fire flames danced around the blade.ICharged again.This time
I dodged his strikes and slammed into him with the edge of the sword at his throat. "See?! I AM SON OF ARES!"
He yelped "Y-Y-Yeah Totally!" I gave him a burn at the back of his neck "That burn mark is to remind you of
me!DO NOT EVER MESS WITH ME AGAIN!" "Yeah!!!OW!"
He rubbed his neck. "Thank you father." I whispered.

Biography:
When Malcolm was 8 he got cursed by His father for giving up a fight. He went to several Schools but each one got destroyed, Or he got thrown out. the same year A Doctor Told Malclolms Mum that he had Dyslexia. He went too one school
which he managed to not be thrown out. At the end of the year, Malcolms Mom found out about camp, and brought him there.

POWERS: No, too overpowered BIO and PERSONALITY: More detail please WEAPONS: Could you just limit it to a certain number of weapons total, I think many is too vague and overpowered

EDITED

Just to let you know, your roleplay example has power-playing within it. Please make sure you never power-play when you actually RP, otherwise there will be a problem. Would you mind elaborating on his personality? What is he like, when you talk to him? How does he act around others? Does he act differently in different situations?

Sorry, Bout that. Ill edit it.

Thanks! Approved.