Avery and the ghost ponnie[fanfic entry]

It was a dark and rainy night when I first saw the ghost pony so i'll start me story from there.
I had just gone to get ready for bed when I saw this flash of lightning and all the sudden there was this beautifull white mare so I grab my boots rain hat and coat and put them on and climb out my window.I walk up to the horse slowly and it panics and kicks it's feet in the air.I start to talk to it and say''whoa girl steady im not going to hurt you''.Then the horse calms down and I mount her and we ride around a bit .Then I realize I need to get back so I tell the ghost mare and she takes me to my window and I climb in side and she gallops off.Now everytime its rainig out I see the ghost mare and we go for a ride.

Y'know, grammar does play a factor in this....

ok can i fix it or not

You can.

What's a "ponnie"?

its pony i spelled it wrong

well in the edited version its good....

thanks i find that its nto that good i can do better i did this in a hurry