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PostSubject: My half-blood    My half-blood Icon_minitime4/16/2012, 8:04 pm

Character Name: Drackster
Gender: Male
Age: 12
Description (hair and eye color, height, body type (skinny, muscular, etc) required): Blonde with red eyes 5 ft 3 in. skinny
Personality: I don't fell like i fit in i have never been befriended by anyone Im always alone....
God and mortal parent: Hermes and Daisy
Powers**: Can summon paper and send it anywhere 3 times a day
Flaws: Cannot read English, cannot do math, will fall asleep at random times
Pets: orange Pegasus with white mane
Weapon: Two Celestial Bronze daggers
Talents/Skills: Stealth when wants to be, can translate Greek very fast
RP Example*: I help the people i can trust, and hope for some. I see many...things that scare me. Am i going crazy? Am I hallucinating or am i seeing costumes of monsters. When i fall asleep i hear a voice. Maybe there is a hospital where i can go for people like me. How come everytime i think of trying to get a message to someone and it works...
Biography*: I was born in 1983 in LA. I stayed at the Lotus Casino for a week soon realizing it was 2012. I hitch-hiked all around searching for answers stumbling across Camp Half Blood. My mom died after my father left. I always wondered who he was. Occasionally i hear a voice in my dreams...
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Kenzie
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Join date : 2012-03-20
Age : 25
Location : canada

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PostSubject: Re: My half-blood    My half-blood Icon_minitime4/16/2012, 8:07 pm

Please add more information. I don't think jumping and flying would be a power for Apollo...
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Age : 27
Location : in my hubbu bubbu bubble- gum bubble (dont pop it!!!)

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PostSubject: Re: My half-blood    My half-blood Icon_minitime4/16/2012, 8:26 pm

Please give more description for your personality.

"Is colorblind unless in combat" Why?How does his suddenly see colors in battle?

"legs will disable every other day for an hour" Why?

Please describe more about your pet.

RP Example needs to be longer.

Can you please try to add more to the biography, or actually you need to, but please make it more descriptive.
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PostSubject: Re: My half-blood    My half-blood Icon_minitime4/17/2012, 7:20 pm

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Kasi
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PostSubject: Re: My half-blood    My half-blood Icon_minitime4/18/2012, 6:00 pm

Your R.P. example needs to be 5 sentances and I'm not sure flying would be exact power for Hermes. Since, the only way Hermes flies is with his magic shoes:)
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PostSubject: Re: My half-blood    My half-blood Icon_minitime4/18/2012, 6:14 pm

And jumping 6 feet high... a bit high, isn't it? xD Not really a power, either. xD
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PostSubject: Re: My half-blood    My half-blood Icon_minitime4/18/2012, 9:37 pm

Edited again
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PostSubject: Re: My half-blood    My half-blood Icon_minitime10/16/2012, 1:06 pm

Alright dude, I actually disagree with Lily saying that the pet needs more description. I have gotten away with just putting down Eagle named Scout so other than that, I love the character idea and the messages are a good idea for a Hermes kid. APPROVED
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